I need help on writing about this Character? does he sound alright?

I am impressed with your neat presentation of this character profile. Most of the questions that are posted have very sloppy paragraphs with third grade grammar/vocabulary/and spelling. So kudos to that. Anyway, if the character sounds okay to you then that is step one. Step two is how you will implement him into your story and overall plot. Make sure that he is believable. You can look up articles pertaining to character creation with a simple Google search:) Good luck<3